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Friday, 21 October 2016

Acrostic poem

WALT: Write an acrostic poem using alliteration.

Ambulance arrived on time to rescued people
Numberouse nature destroyed
Gigantic great valuables were lost
Rustling roof tops spinning out of control
Yelling yaks ran away from the danger
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Figurative language

For the past few days we have been learning about figurative language. There are nine figurative languages and they are similes, metaphors, personification, hyperbole, onomatopoeia, imagery, rhythm, Alliteration, assonance and repetition. I enjoyed learning about figurative language.

Wednesday, 19 October 2016

personification paragraph

WALT: Write a paragraph using personification


The sun came out to play as the soft whistling wind turned into a noisy crowd. The leaves danced on the branches. Waves jumped up and crashed back down into rocks. The shells were rolling around in circles on the sand playing rolly polly. The ships running across the water to other islands carrying people.

Tuesday, 18 October 2016

Descriptive writing


WALT: Write a descriptive paragraph using imagery.

Today we wrote a paragraph about a earthquake using the five senses. I worked in a pair with Heather.

The earthquake was like a magnet, drawing in buildings and making them collapse onto the floor. Chaotic people shot around in fear, while birds instantly evacuated the area. My nose was filled with dirt and dust from broken cement. As the ground shook I flopped onto the cold floor that I was once standing on. Dogs cried out loudly while tree leaves and branches rustled together aggressively. My hands were trembling by the sight of crazy power lines uncontrollably swaying in the polluted brown sky that once was a shade of baby blue.

Monday, 17 October 2016

Sports camp


A while ago the years 7 and 8's went to sports camp and came back with five trophies. Everyone had fun and came back with good memories.

Friday, 14 October 2016

Personification poem

The beach


The leaves dance on the branches
As the waves clash into each other
The wind running around

As the seaweed dancing for joy

Monday, 12 September 2016

My apple turnover

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Today I made a apple turnover. All the other kids had different ideas. I enjoyed making it and it was fun. I hope we do this again.